In the modern times, team working skills play an important role in the social life. Thus, these skills need to be improved frequently through activities in which you involve. I participated in a volunteer club where I have chance to take part in several volunteer events. As our recent event: “....”, thanks to these skills such as: planning, building a team, co-operating with others, resolving conflict, we accomplished our goals with a successful event.
As a member of organisation department, I was a leader of a 5-people-team who had responsibility to set up detail timeline and design background base on the fixed content of this event. First, we had to understand carefully our aim, plan and tasks in order to classify them. Each co-operator must be ensured to complete work on time. That also means I, as a co-ordination, had to negotiate with our leadership to gain commitment for our team’s time and other resources. Besides, all the posibilities must be considered, especially opposite one.
Second, being a member of team, all of his ideas and original thoughts are encouraged and considered seriously. While communicating with each others, contradiction might be occurred. In that case, I had to find out solutions to resolve them. Thanks to that, I have the ability to understand conflict and keep the team focused.
To sum it up, though teamwork activities can offer many challenges, I can be encouraged and given a helping hand so as to develop my strength and improve my weekness. Only when co-operating is not only working together but also accomplishing a common goal, can team be a team.
Thứ Sáu, 9 tháng 7, 2010
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Ui, hỏng, đọc bài của Thu thấy hình như là mình viết sai đề ý. Tại cứ đinh ninh là show skills thui, ko nhớ vụ candidate nào ý. :(!
Trả lờiXóaHic, đành vậy, em đợi chém!
[Oanh]
I think u should write:
Trả lờiXóaTo sum up, teamwork activities help me improve my strengths as well as minimize weaknesses.
There are several mistakes about article in ur essay.
Eg: .. where I have a chance/ chances....
The passive voice should be considered too. I think u use it too much.
In my opinion, U have some troubles with E grammar so u should start with simple structures.
U had good ideas but ur expression sometimes is too complicated. It makes readers hard to follow them :)
Practice makes perfect. The more u write, the better. ^^
( PS: I have some troubles with Vietnamese font :(( so I type E to avoid misunderstanding :D )
Tớ đọc bài của cậu thấy không suôn sẻ lắm. Cậu dùng từ chưa ổn, câu cú chưa ổn.
Trả lờiXóavd:
1. in the modern times --> thứ nhất, ít khi thấy có 'the', thứ hai là sao cậu ko dùng cụm 'Nowadays' or 'In modern life'.
2.Thanks to... --> Cái này thường dùng cho sb hơn là sth.
3. I participated in a volunteer club where I have chance to take part in several volunteer events' --> thừa 'volunteer' ở sau.
4. 'As a member of organisation department, I was a leader of a 5-people-team who had responsibility to set up detail timeline and design background base on the fixed content of this event' --> thứ 1, 'department' nghe to tát quá. thứ 2, 'a/an' nhiều quá!. thứ 3, 'who' của cậu thay thế cho 'team'?. thứ 4, 'detail' hay là 'detailed'? thứ 5, 'base on' hay là 'based on'.
5. 'understand carefully' -> 'understand clearly'
6. 'I had to find out solutions to resolve them' --> thừa 'resolve'
trên là 1 số ví dụ tớ đưa ra :D.
Thu và Jeff nhận xét nhiều rồi, tớ chỉ có băn khoăn là "co-ordination" không mang nghĩa là người, nên Oanh dùng cụm "That also means I, as a co-ordination" thì k đúng?
Trả lờiXóa