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In world today there many changes in technology and management styles. The good working environment plays an important role in the enterprise’s success, it also has positive effects on both the employee and the company. The following paragraphs I will list some key factors that I believe in making an perfect condition for working.

First of all , the company must issue/build up the sound regulations. These rules clearly stipulate for the reward or the punishment to encourage the employees work effectively and discourage them from negative actions. For example, the staff will be got a bonus for his excellent performance and docked wages when he leaves off work unreasonably.

Secondly, the good colleagues is an essential factor of an ideal workplace. Any employee want to work with staff who is competent , enthusiastic and diligent as well as working efficaciously as independent man or in a team. This creates an effective working environment in which each staff can demonstrate and develop his ability , get through challenges, and finish excellently his task and his team.

The following important element is a proficient manager. He must be impartial , good leadership and tactful in relationship with his employee. These help him organize and manage his firm effectively, use the best resource of the company. For instance , his good behavior to everyone and skilful in solving the conflict between employees make them happy and be respected, as a result they will wholeheartedly dedicate and increase their labour productivity.

Last but not least, facility is an indispensable factor to conduce to an ideal environment working. Modern equipment such as computer, telephone, printer, fax machine, photocopier are essential element in the office. Besides, spacious room with convenient fixtures and services create comfortable feelings that help people have better performance.

To conclude, all people wish to work in an ideal condition which involves sound and clear rules , perfect colleagues, good boss and convenient facilities. Those key factors contribute to perfect environment for working.

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