Nguyễn Xuân Tuyển, KT-KT faculty, Banking Academy

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My essay:

Due to adopting East traditional views of a man earning, a woman doing homemaker and children rearing, so many people think that raising children is only women’s. Yet that is a full misconception, especially in the modern society nowadays.

First of all, the main argument in favor of my view is that a man and a woman have the same role in raising children, and a toddler is not able to grow up with lacking any the mother’s or father’s guides. It should consider the difference of character between two genders: males are usually to like be adventure, resilient, aggressive and easy to resort to violence in attempting to solve the problems, whereas females are often patient, diligent, obedient, and worried and inferiority complex… From that features, these two natures will supplement each other in child rearing. A child need be adopted the father’s braveness, maturity and the mother’s grace, care, so both are very important for a baby in childhood as well as in adulthood later.

The second, men are less to ask their children for emotional questions such as “Do you feel cold? Would do you like a drink? Like women’ questions. In stead of that they can become old toddlers to play with their children as carriers, a man is always ready to respond his children’ queries. By the way, a child will learn many useful things from the father and develop the responsibility it takes to be a good man or woman.

The third, indeed, if a little boy is less gotten in touch with the same sexier, he often tends to become womanlike. He will lack of a man’s characters and thereafter when he marries, the happiness will be fragile because of easy being bullied in day to day his life.

To sum up, while many people support for a women’s greater role in child rearing in most societies, let us not forget that men’s role is very important too. What if does a child lack of the father’s nurtures? He or she will grow up emotionally immature or unformed.