I have heard it said that men are just as good as women at parenting. I could not disagree more with them. I believe that woman make better parents and that this is why they have greater role in raising children in most societies.
The main reason is that mothers spend more time with their children than anyone else. Social support of maternity gives women more opportunities to be with their infants. Furthermore, fathers usually sacrifice his time with family to work hard in order to afford things. This lets mothers become more familiar with their children and be aware of children’s habits. As you know, children are very curious about very things and they would find the answer from their parents. Mothers who are virtually with the children twenty-four hours a day, undoubtedly, tremendously influence their children through instructing them.
The second reason makes me feel this way is that women have characters to become better parents than men have. We could not talk about them without their carefulness. Especially when there are babies in your houses, mothers is the one who stay up late and wake up early to take care of the babies. Take me for an example, my mom always get me prepared and give me advices to keep me away from potential troubles whenever I am going on vacation. What I said above, you would hardly find from certain father.
For these reasons, I am sure that mothers make the best parents. They spend much time and know how to take good care of their children with their carefulness. Even though, I could not deny the truth that fathers are also important to children.
Thứ Sáu, 19 tháng 3, 2010
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Bài dép có ưu điểm cấu trúc rõ ràng, mạch lạc, nhiều chỗ dùng từ khá hay. T có thể học tập thêm dc nhiều từ cách dùng từ của bạn ^^
Trả lờiXóaTheo t bai còn một sỗ chỗ chưa ổn:
+ social support of maternity t k hiểu ý bạn ở đây là??? từ support bạn dùng với nghĩa gì??
+ afford thường đi với can, could, be able to để nói về khả năng.. afford things: nghĩa là có dc nhiều thứ??? có thể nói :
fathers usually sacrifice time FOR family in order to gain a higher position in career way.
hehe tạm thời vậy đã, giờ bạn phải bon bon trên xe đi cày :))
Cấu trúc khá hay, nhưng vẫn chưa cẩn thận xem lại. Ví dụ influence + on smt, smb
Trả lờiXóaVà "I could not deny the truth that fathers are also important to children." I think that "I could not deny the fact that fathers are also important in each child's life. "
Tạm thời thế đã!
@bạn Thu:
Trả lờiXóa"social support of maternity" của mình là chế độ nghỉ đẻ ý :D. Cụm này mình lấy trong article trong sách ^^.
Còn cái afford thì mình quên bỏ can/could/be able to vào thật :D.
Time with family cũng đúng Thu à, tại vì mình có đọc bài time with family vs. time at work :D.
@xt: influence của cậu là n. còn của tớ là v. mà, nên không có ON :D.
Tớ không hiểu câu cuối tớ sai gì :-?, chỉ có cái là dở hơn câu của cậu thui à :D
Btw, thanx guys :x :x